What do you think of my rap on a scale of (1-10)?

i'll give you a 1. your flow is to elementary. you really not talking about anything. it seems to me like you was just trying to find words that rhyme. just keep on trying man and it will come around. one thing you really need to do is be unique. we have to many people out there right now that's doing the same ****. we need something different. if you have some recorded material, send me a link and i could critic it for you. pgrimy@gmail.com