Should i give this poem to my girlfriend not finished yet ?

im mesmerized by the envigorating beauty radiating off her beauitful skin when i see or get near her frozen in time as i gaze upon her long lucious hair i take the form of a statue as she stares with those deep eyes i could stare right back into them for hours at a time a mere hug or simple wave from her erases all the negativity out of my day her sweet innocent laughter illuminates my soul she travels with such grace and flair like an angel without wings as she draws closer to me my heart flutters i can feel my chest pounding through my shirt seeing her glowing pearly white smile such an inspiring site forcing a moist tear to scroll down my face i wish she'd never go away i wish to be confined to her love for all eternity