Ladies, if you were how how would you respond ?? Did I mess up or what ?

all of it was great, except for the " and answer my calls when i call you,, i know your busy but i dotn like gettin ignord like tat, specialy by someone i care bout and who cares bout me" that sounded like you were MAKING her stay with you, trying to make her love you. i dont know your situation, but i think she should come back to you